Monday, January 28, 2008

Peer review of Jassim Al Subaie's Digital portfolio

Jassim I found it very easy to navigate through your portfolio but you do not hve enough artifacts in your portfolio. In fact I did not find most of the objects needed like your video about me. I did although see that you have wrote about every subject which is very good for the reader or viewer of the digital portfolio. You should try to put some more colours in your theme, I can show you how. The reflection you have is very little you should reflect on what you have done what you want to do and what do you expect to happen if you do that.

There are a few adjustments you have to do to your portfolio like your name, more pages. If you change your color you will get a better look for you portfolio. You have some improvment neede and hopefully you will get a better mark. You need to improve your multimedia efforts in your work, ask the teacher or me. you need improvment but good start and hopefully in the next week you will get really better, I will try to help you with that.

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